Hi Delanora,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of confusion and pleading. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is wondering if their is anyone actually listening when they go online. I wondered this myself when I first started to use Facebook. Until I started sharing all my posts and getting friend requests, anyway. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is noting to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.