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Review #4487816
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 Emptiness  [E]
About the feeling
by Dreamer
Review of Emptiness  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Greetings, Dreamer!
Considering what you were talking about in this, I think your handle might be very appropriate since if feels like you were dreaming when you were writing this, and that's pretty much what it's about, right?
You went kind of deep with this, but I can sort of see what you're talking about. By those lights I think you mean the stars and how tiny we are as human beings when compared to everything else in the universe. This is true, but you kind of put a negative spin on it. There's a lot more to us when you really get down to it!
As for the emptiness, I'm not sure what you mean, other than we all feel that way sometimes.
There's a few missing words and punctuation niggles in this, Dreamer, but overall it's a good 'thinking' piece, so I'll let you get back to your lunch before that emptiness settles in on you again! *Smile*
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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