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Email  [E]
Playing with head and tail rhyme
by Tinker
Review of Email  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, Tinker ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" , *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title & Summary
         Email Playing with head and tail rhyme. Perfect title, and the summary intrigued me, and I then noticed the beginning of the lines rhymed (the heads) and the end of the line rhymed (the tails), making perfect sense! *Bigsmile* But oh, what a challenge that would be to conquer! That's quite an accomplishment!

My First Impression
         As I read through this piece, I connected with each and every line! I've experience the very same emails you have mentioned here. I remember when--years ago--I clicked into my email account and my jaw practically dropped! You know what I'm talking about, I'm sure, *Facepalm* and now those type of emails go into our Spam files.

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* Everything looked great!

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* None whatsoever...

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* I can deal with most of these annoying emails, as after years of experience with them, I know what to open and what not to (most of the time *Laugh*). But it makes me wonder about people like my mother-in-law, who is 88 years old, how she might react to all that garbage. (It's better she doesn't, I'm thinking. *Wink*)

*Sun* I enjoyed this piece very much! Thank you for sharing and also making me aware of head and tail poetry!

         *Starb* My favorite unfavorite line... *Bigsmile*
                             "Send this on! If not you'll die".
         I remember the first time I read this line at the end of a chain email. I stopped sending those forwards from then on. I used to tell my friends not to send them to me as I didn't want to spread the terror some people might feel from this senseless threat. I think most people do the same now, as I haven't received any in quite some time. Thank goodness! *Bigsmile*

*Penguin* Nicely written! And what an awesome job on the head and tail rhyming! *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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