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Greetings, S.z.kamoonpuri!
This is different. Good, but different.
I'm kind of on the fence about bullfighting. I know there's been a lot of talk about this 'sport', and after reading your byline, I think there are more cons than pros. You mentioned many of the things that's just plain wrong with it, such as the bull not having much of a chance (although a few matadors do get killed), the bloodlust, etcetera.
So I guess when it comes down to it, I'd say I'm against it.
Now, as for the poem itself, it seems you've used a lot of different styles. I'm no expert on poetry, so I don't know if this is some new form of poetry or not, but at least it's unusual. The rhyming meter seemded a little bumpy, but again, what do I know?
Overall, good job.
Kee ponw ritin gon, S.z.kamoonpuri! Thanks for sharing this, and have a great day!

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