Hi 165BC,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anger and self-loathing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who blames themselves for getting raped and, thus, cuts themselves as a means of self-punishment I am hoping that the speaker can come to terms with their attack and find peace. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.