Hi Melody,
This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of love and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering how this date will end. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a couple who spend a romantic evening together which includes a serenade. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that need your attention:

1)He was a good singer and-There should be a comma after "singer".

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.