My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "A Day Too Soon" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly and I love your Form: Spenserian Sonnet. I'll have to try this form sometime.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last stanza is I adore.

My Favorite Part: The last stanza is my favorite because of the fade into an endless dream.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

Review of "Orion's Keep"

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