Hi Juul,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the piece. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the strength you have gained even though your were not supported by those closest to you. I am so sorry that the people in your life did not support you. I know what they feels like. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)Thank you to those who didn't believed in me,-"believed" should be "believe".

You use an aggressive style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.