My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "Pain, the poem" is a great poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last two stanzas I adore.

My Favorite Part: The sixth and last stanza is my favorites.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle



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