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 Laugh  [E]
Make people laugh and heal them
by Kumar
Review of Laugh  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Kumar!
I'm no expert on poetry, but I thought this was great! The meter seemed good, and the rhyming words weren't bad either.
But it was the subject that I liked best. As your last line says, laughter is the best medicine, and considering the way the world is these days, that's probably what we need the most of, right behind LOVE!
Well done, my friend! You have a nice outlook on life!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Kumar, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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