Hi BeautysDarkness,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is suffering from bipolar disorder and it is making their life a mess. I am filled with sympathy for the speaker. I am hoping that they find the help they need. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The poem has a unique rhyme which is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.