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| (4.0)  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Greetings, Vicda! This isn't bad for your first piece on here. I started to take computer programming in college, but sadly I didn't last the semester. I do know a bit about it though, so I understand some of this. You did a good job of showing Victor's relief first at finishing his 'session', and then his frustration and sadness after he watches all that hard work (and his 'dream') just disappear on the screen right before his eyes. I know his computer didn't crash, per se, but I know how he feels. As for the technology of coding and whatnot, a few years ago they came out with a speech program that would recognize your voice and do the typing for you! You didn't even have to touch the keys-it was all done by your voice alone. I tried it, but it takes a while to clearly recognize your speech and speech patterns. Anyway, good job! One tiny niggle: "It's finally done.", he says to himself. ('done," he says') Kee ponw ritin gon, Vicda, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
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