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 Did The Cat Eat The Tobacco First?  [E]
Women don’t appreciate antiques.
by Paul
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Konnichiwa, Paul!
This is cool, and I totally relate to it!
I'm not sure what contest this was for, but I like how you wrote it all in dialogue (which flowed naturally and realistically I might add). Many women aren't very appreciative of the smell of a nice tobacco, and this female seems to be one of them. I don't know if it was because of the age of the tobacco or the fact that it also smelled like 'cat droppings' *Laugh*, but at least her husband wanted to try it out.
The spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!), and that ending was perfect: "Yes, dear." God, how many times did I say that when I was married? *Laugh*
Kee ponw ritin gon, Paul! Thanks for the laughs, good luck in the contest (although I don't think you'll need any), and have a wonderful evening/tomorrow!

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