Hi Xnwxr,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about taking comfort in your family's love when the darkness of the world overwhelms you. I have always taken strength from my family and the other people I love. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
You responded to this review 06/15/2019 @ 8:18am EDT
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