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I Write In 2019   [13+]
Lots of creative pursuits in 2019.
by 💙 Carly
         Review for entry/chapter: "Teenage Angst" 
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, 💙 Carly ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" , *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title & Summary
         Teenage Angst is the perfect title for this. As it's an entry, there is no summary.

My First Impression
         I love this! *Shock* Wow, you really got this down perfectly. I could easily visualize this irritated teenage girl as she flounced away, thinking her friends would follow, though they didn't. Oh, I would not want to be a teenage girl again. *Laugh* Great job portraying her. Great imagery and also, I could feel her emotions very well!

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* Nope. You were consistent not using punctuation and it worked well in this piece.

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* None

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* I really liked this. I could feel her angst, as if I were her, myself!

         *Starb* My favorite lines
Expecting friends to follow
No one did.


*Penguin* Nicely written! *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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