Hi Brittany,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and passion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a four year period when you indulged in fantasies of a love affair with a dream lover. I was delighted with the intimate look I got at you as a person as well as a writer. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.