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Review of Innocence Lost  
Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, Mari!
This starts out as such a nice, feel good, ‘Disney-esque’ story that I was having a hard time seeing how the title was going to fit in. But about ½ way through when I read about ‘enormous incisors’, I started figuring it out, and I knew this wasn’t going to end well.
But not like that!
Seriously though, if you were going for a twisted/surprise ending, you certainly did it!
And I thought Bambi’s mother getting shot was tragic; I don’t think Disney would put something like this on the big screen! *Laugh*
But it is a fact of life and a part of nature, so it is what it is. Besides, as a horror writer, I LIKED IT! *Smirk2*
Well done, Mari!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Thanks for sharing this, and have a wonderful day!

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