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 Catch some fish   [E]
A grandpa and granddaughter love the country side
by Noa Makinen
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, Noa!
I like this. It’s a really sentimental, nostalgic piece, and I can see that it comes from your heart and how much your grandfather meant to you. Those references to Blueberry Lake and the trips you two took to them to fish really stand out, and it’s a great tribute to a man you miss and admire.
But no matter what, please know that you are very blessed to at least have those memories!
I remember catching my first trout with my own grandfather in California when I was about 7 years old, and it’s something I’ll never forget. It was on an old fly rod, and as soon as I hooked it I jerked it out of the water so hard it went flying over my head! Seriously!
You don’t have your bio up yet so I don’t know how old you are, but as far as Heaven ‘taking’ your grandfather away, that’s just something we all have to go through.
There’s a few grammar and spelling mistakes in this, but I’ll only touch on one major one. The main thing is the subject of this, anyway.
‘roaster’ should be ‘rooster’
Well done, Noa. Your grandfather is indeed looking down and reading this, and I guarantee you he’s smiling at those memories!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Noa, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you’re going to love it here!
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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