Hi Kenneth,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with excitement and wonder. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the joy a parent feels at the birth of their child. I have no children but I am delighted for anyone who is privileged to have this type of joy in their lives. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.