Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Hi jolly, This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with longing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about poets which hold on to the human side of life in a world which is empty of human connection. I know that people say that the prevalence of technology will end our connecting to each other. I try to connect emotionally with everyone I encounter online. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
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