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Given: Jul 7, 2019 at 5:34am
Length: 1,132 Characters |
854 w/o WritingML
Hi Webbie!
I just read a chapter of Lou Ryan's new case told in first person views. It's been a pleasure to review your story "No Appointment Necessary" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
TITLE:The title fits this story.
FIRST IMPRESSION: This is good story. great characters, and an interesting plot-line. I like the suspense of the story.
THE STORY: Lou Ryan's was a private detective. He works in Lou Ryan detective agency. Lou Ryan's prepared himself to stand up for justice. In this story you paints him beautifully.
SETTING:In a modern time. CHARACTERS:All the characters well developed. I like the character Lou Ryan's.
DIALOG: Dialogue floated normally between the characters .
OVERALL IMPRESSION: Wonderful story. I enjoyed it reading.
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