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 Stars  [E]
Nature is great!
by Hemaidy
Review of Stars  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Hemaidy,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is inquisitive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the universe and how big it could be. I look up in the sky every night at the gorgeous stars and constellations and wonder the same thing. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Questionku poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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