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Oil and Canvas  [13+]
Flash fiction from prompt. Use words: painting tree and clock.
by Leadwood
Review of Oil and Canvas  
Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Guten tag, Leadwood!
I thought this was really neat! I love the idea of you being what I assume to an escaped convict running from the hounds as they chase you through those woods, only to stumble and wake up in a museum with that painting of your captors looking around for you with their horses and confused faces!
Sounds like something right out of The Twilight Zone!
One niggle (I think):
'heals' should be 'heels' (unless this is UK spelling)
I know you wrote this for a contest, but why are you writing them days after the contest is over? In fact, I think I've seen a few of your FF stories that you've written for The Daily FF contest that you wrote after the prompt words were over.
You obviously have the talent, so what's up?
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and thanks for sharing this! It was a pleasure to read, and have a wonderful day/weekend!

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