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Review of The Threesome  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi there, T-Writer!
I saw this in The "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" .
This is a pretty neat story for only using 300 words (or less), but I didn't see any of the prompt words in it!
I like the idea of these triplets trying to pull this off, and I'm sure triplets and twins have tried things like this in the past. I know if I was a twin or triplet I would! *Smirk*
The spelling and grammar was flawless (thank you!), and the whole piece flowed smoothly. But as I said, you didn't use any of the prompt words, which are: shirt, board and table.
Otherwise, good job!
By the way, here's a hint about this contest if you decide to enter it again: Arakun the Twisted Raccoon really likes surprise/twisted endings!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write (and according to your portfolio introduction, you do!), then you're going to love it here!
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PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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