Hi Njoyim,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anger and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman thinking about all the times she sacrifices a normal life when she got back at her enemies. I am wondering if this woman will get a chance to get the life she wants. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.