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 The Wolf And The Hedgehog  [E]
A Modern Fable
by Mickey Dougs
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, Mickey Dougs!
For your 1st piece on here, this isn’t bad. It’s a little simple though, but I’m glad you something posted. Everybody has to start somewhere.
You’re missing some punctuation with periods and commas, but the spelling was excellent.
I see how this can be considered a fable. Just because Wolf hasn’t ever seen a porcupine before doesn’t mean it was lying, and Wolf had to learn this lesson the hard way!
Ouch!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Mickey, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you’re going to love it here!
PS-I don’t know how old you are (not that it matters), but you might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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