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 Shopping with Santa  [E]
Black Friday, not so black?
by Jimminycritic
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Konnichiwa, Jimminy, and happy belated 11th 'birthday' on here!
This is really neat nostalgic/sentimental and endearing piece, and I love the way you told it. And I noticed you wrote it during the holidays, so I'm sure that just makes it even more special for you!
Christmas time is a time of loving, sharing, giving, and hopefully being around loved ones. I can just picture you standing in the back while Mom and Jimmy were having their Christmas discussion, realizing it wasn't going to such a good Christmas after all. And then to have your Dad take you off the 'naughty list' just for a hug?
If I weren't so thick-skinned, that would almost bring a tear to my eye!
This is kind of off topic, but when I was 16 I rolled my father's brand new 1981 Pontiac Trans Am (It was black with the eagle on the hood-looked just like the Bandit from the movie Smoky and the Bandit). Fortunately I didn't get hurt, but he didn't speak to me for a week, and most days when I got out of school I'd just walk down to the river and watch the birds. One day I was down there and I felt a tap on my shoulder. It was my dad. He put his arm around me and said, "I shouldn't have been so harsh with you. That damn car can be replaced, but I can't replace you."
That made me feel a LOT better!
Anyway, great job with this, Jimminy!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and may you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC!


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