Hi Kiara,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your feelings about yourself and other random thoughts when you wrote the piece. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:


1)Sorry Mr. Writer and I know I shouldn't lazy,-Should read "Sorry Mr. Writer. I know I shouldn't be lazy,"

2)regardless of weather-"weather" should be "whether".

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.