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by ruwth
         Review for entry/chapter: "~ The Apostle John Reminisces ~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Ruwth—

I’m writing a review as you requested in the newsfeed and hope I’m about to be helpful.

You know, I’d never considered what it must have been like to record such things. Well done. I especially like his prayerful dedication and the fondness John shows as he recalls their time together. You balanced it perfectly with reverence. Nicely done.

I want you to look back and edit this one paragraph for some typographic inconsistencies; it’s all I saw that needed fixing.

Your earthly ministry for me started with your cousin the prophet John. At first people thought he was the Messiah. I can remember hearing his message of repentance and wondering myself if he was our Saviour. John always declared he was but a voice calling in the wilderness encouragi g all of us to clear the way for the one who was to come. "The one who was to come" was YOU but I don't think John realized who you were until you came to him for baptism.

Carol

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