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Review #4495846
Viewing a review of:
Wheel of Fortune  [18+]
My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?
by ridinghhood-p.boutilier
         Review for entry/chapter: "July 29, 2019" 
Review of Wheel of Fortune  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, ridinghhood-p.boutilier ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" , *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title
         Appropriate title *Smile*

My First Impression
         How fascinating! I loved it!

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* Everything looked great. The flow was amazing and the story in this poem was easy to follow along. Great job!

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* It's not necessary to edit, but I did notice, you used the word that twice within just a few lines.

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* I don't know much about tarot cards, but they've always piqued my interest. I felt you did an outstanding job with this. It didn't feel forced at all. Very nice! I particularly appreciated the additional line... The HerbCrafter's Tarot--Adelita of Water--Ocatillo--Protect your heartwood, but let your love blossom.

*Penguin* Nicely written! *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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