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Review of Sweet Cardinal  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Lisa!

I just read your poem about Cardinal. I appreciate the way the narrator told the story. It expressed beautifully the narrator’s love for the nature. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with her crafted words.

I like the lines
"One lone Cardinal upon a branch,
He feeds every day here at my ranch."

Yes, being with nature is really wonderful . They give pleasure to our heart.

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