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I like this freestyle quatrain poem followed by AABB rhyme scheme. I appreciate the emotions portrayed in this poem.

The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. Throughout the poem the poet telling the states of mind of a novelist.

I like the lines “At the end there’s resolution, I return the status quo,
It’s an unfinished adventure, as the sequel will show.
I slept well last night, then woke with a blink,
The kettle boils, I make a drink…”.

I like the thoughts evokes in this poem. It reflects the thoughts of all novelist.
Thank you for sharing your excellent poem.

Mina


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