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Review of Let's just say  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This piece is so interesting because of the desire of the narrator for something to happen. I like the emotions evokes in this poem. I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I like the lines

"How can you be real?
All my thoughts seem to fall to you
Lost in that smile no way out
Let's just say I wasn't ready for this"

I enjoyed it reading. Nice work!

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