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 Children Must Play  [E]
A rainy day has some good results. This was also too late for a contest.
by Dorianne
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Children Must Play"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

You paint a wonderful picture of a rainy day when the little children played with a small wooden boat. It has nice rhythm.
The tones I find in this poem is soothing. It makes me nostalgic.

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