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I want to welcome you in Writing.com. It's been pleasure to review your "Invalid Item" on behalf of The Angel Army. This review reflect my opinion only and I am not a writing expert.

I like this story written with the Will Rogers inspirational quote "Don't let yesterday take up too much of today" . You used the prompt cleverly in your story. I like the fact

Doubt, like a faithless demon, plagues me and triggers my fight or flight response. Fear, that Archdemon, rears up inside mind an attempts to keep me both sightless and deafened so as not to discover true love or hear her calling.

I like how your story ended.

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