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This is so thoughtful poem written for ocean. I like the concept.

Earth is indeed a mother to all. But sadly if we don't pay the respect that she deserves. We don’t even think about our next generation. Our country experiences different types of natural disasters almost every year. Every year we experienced Floods because of the climate change impacts.

I especially liked the lines
“Plastic straws left on beaches, sidewalks, and streets
Ends up in the ocean by a gust of wind, or rainstorms.”

Thanks for sharing this poem here.
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