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The Flower I Was.  [E]
Life as a flower.
by Spiritual Dawning
Review of The Flower I Was.  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Flower I Was. on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This is a sweet poem written from the point of a flower. Beautifully praising the marvels of nature for example The kids walk by splashing puddles, wearing boots.

The meaning is deep that keeps me reading it to the end. I especially liked the lines
“I am just a flower and one day I will die.
Until then I'll pretend I can fly just like the birds in the sky.”

Thanks for sharing this poem here.

*Fairyr* MINA*Fairyl*
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