Hi Andrew,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a girl who is starving herself because of here desire to be the opposite gender. I am hoping that the speaker will find help before she really hurts herself. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I love this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.