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  |  | Home Sweet Home  [13+] An infected soldier struggles to return to his home.  |
| (5.0)| Hi! I found your name on the public review page. It's been a pleasure to review your story "Home Sweet Home" as part of my assignment for "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. TITLE: The title “Home Sweet Home” fits your story. FIRST IMPRESSION: This is good tragic story about a soldier. I like the character Charlie. You painted him beautifully.  The STORY: Charlie was a soldier. He was infected by a virus developed his the enemies. The virus created bad effects on his cell tissue as well his mind. I appreciate Charlie’s courage even though he was in a awful situation. RHYTHM: Your story has good rhythm. It flowed beautifully. PLOTLINE: You have interesting plot line. I like the descriptions and how the story ended. THEME: I could imagine the scene. . OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your story.   Mina   ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 08/06/2019 @ 2:02pm EDT