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Hi Angryoldgit,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive and full of contentment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who chooses to wander around instead of having a permanent home. I am hoping that the speaker will remain happy with their choice. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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