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Review #4497323
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 One  [E]
6 line poem
by IE
Review of One  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a micro-review for poetry written by IE for the poem "One"  for the group "The WDC Angel Army" . Please note that this review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find it helpful.

**Impressions**

Your title is suitable to the subject of your poem. It sets the stage for it in its reflection of your poem’s theme which captures the essence of it. This is a lovely poem about relationship. You express the spiritual connection between two people who are one in their love.For me, poetry opens the door of opportunity for the writer to explore different ways of presenting poetry and to do it in new and unique ways to stimulate readers even if we sometimes bend the rules of forms to make it our own. I'm a formalist poet and I love to read, write and create form poetry. I like minimalist poetry and this one is a good example of it. It is heartfelt and introspective. It is also poetry that is short, concise and succinct, which I always enjoy. Nice imagery. Nice color and shade in your wording that promotes and evokes emotion. You paint a picture of a loving relationship that any reader can relate to. Flow is good as is the line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm and use of enjambment. Lovely depth of feeling. I like the sense (or implication) of tender devotion expressed by the descriptive “tightly knitted harmony” which I can relate to. Nicely done. Word choice is good; nice use of alliteration, assonance and consonance. No spelling errors found.

**Overall**

This is a well crafted love poem which I enjoyed from beginning to end. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on!

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