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Review of Husband  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Lisa, you did many wonderful reviews. It's my pleasure to review a poem "Invalid Item"  as part of my assignment for "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This has lovely romantic thoughts inside every line. It expressed the poet’s deep love and affection to her husband. I like the simplicity and the images of her husband the poet have used here.

The tone is soothing that makes me read this poem to the end.

My favorite lines

My dream come true, my prince so valiant

I love you even if our love has just bloomed

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I enjoyed it reading.

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