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Given: Aug 7, 2019 at 11:11am
Length: 806 Characters |
792 w/o WritingML
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!
Theme/Subject Matter: "Cherish" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!
Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.
Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the fifth stanza.
My Favorite Part: The fifth stanza is my favorite too because your hands caressing warm placental earth, it came to me that nature was the hope for our rebirth.
My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.
Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.
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