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*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Bon jour, AnonNaomi!
This is pretty wild, but I like the way you thought outside of the box to come up with something like this! Can't say I've seen this 'style' before...
I love dark pieces and everything horror, so to find this on a Read & Review was a real treat! Just the idea of your protagonist seeing her dead brother (and even in the knife! *Shock2*) was trippy enough, but now they've gone and got her friend, Arya, involved too?
The spelling and grammar was flawless, and for a short piece like this, it turned out pretty darn good.
Kee ponw ritin gon, AnonNaomi, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
By the way, I poked around in your portfolio and saw some interesting stuff, so I'll probably read another of your pieces soon!
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

A NOVEL WORKSHOP REVIEW!

PSSS-If you want more exposure for your items you can put them on the Please Review Page or The Shameless Plug Page under Community on the left hand side.

Angus Hand


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