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Hi there, Somik!
I'm no expert on poetry, but I thought this was pretty good, considering how short it is.
What caught my eye about this was the byline. I recently turned 54. I know that's not considered old, but I've been thinking a lot about my own mortality these last couple of years. I think about what I've learned in those years, as well as how much more I NEED to learn. I think about my Grandannachildren and what their lives will be like when they're my age. I think about a lot.
Sorry, I digress.
You're so right when you mention beauty and what it really is, and your analogy of bees to flowers was great! We all have internal beauty, but sadly, not a lot of people appreciate us for that. Society is so caught up with just seeing the outside beauty these days. And the really sad part about that is is that just because somebody is beautiful on the outside doesn't mean they're beautiful on the inside. In fact, they could be a MONSTER on the inside!
I know! I was married to a red head! *Laugh* I'm kidding...sort of.
Anyway, nice poem!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Somik, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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