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 A Fed-Up Plate Dishes Dirt  [E]
What if a plate could complain to the cutlery? A contest winner.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "A Fed-Up Plate Dishes Dirt" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the third stanza.

My Favorite Part: The first stanza is my favorite because "Dinner's on me," screamed the plate. and "This is dirty work I hate!".

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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