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 Little Bat  [E]
These stories will tell the tale of Little Bat and her adventures outside the cave.
by Angelica- Happy May 5th!
Review of Little Bat  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!

I just read a chapter of your story about the little bat. It’s a good story. It’s been pleasure to review "Little Bat"  on behalf of The Angel Army.

This story is well written and told. Writing stories for children is a challenge. I think your story could grab the children to reading it to the end.
You have good imagination, the dialogues are rich. It make the children feel like they are traveling with the little bat. You crafted the character bat so beautifully.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

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