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OFF-CUTS!  [XGC]
Suitable refuse.
by Laurie Razor
         Review for entry/chapter: "In Goo We Trust (The Tale of Howie Stickum)" 
Review of OFF-CUTS!  
Review by Angus
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Rated: XGC | (5.0)
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Osiyo, Laurie!
I’m reviewing this as an "The WDC Angel Army"  Angel and to thank you for all the great reviews you do on this site!
OK. I’ll put it simply: if you were going for the incredibly bizarre story here, you’ve outdone yourself. I honestly think this is one of the strangest pieces I’ve read on here, but you did an excellent job of writing it! Your lexicography and vocabulary really stand out, and although it needs to be read many, many times to understand it, it still makes sense in its own twisted way.
From what I got from it, this is a first person/insect’s account of a fly being sucked up by glue gun that he mistakenly worshiped as a God of some sort.
If that’s not it, it’s still extremely warped, whatever it is!
But it was also pretty entertaining!
The ‘sticky-icky’? *Shock2* Kind of sounds like the name of a 90s punk rock band! *Laugh* Maybe with Jeff Goldblum (dressed up as his character from the movie, The Fly) as the lead singer? *Rolling*
Kee ponw ritin gon, Laurie, PLEASE!
PS-Keep this in your portfolio because I might put a ribbon on it for being so demented!

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