Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Greetings, Hullabaloo! This is cool. Unfortunately though, I can totally relate to it. I gave up trying to draw by the time I was in 6th grade! Having poor Caz try to prove her artistic talent to her tutor is one thing, but to have her boyfriend give her false hope is another thing altogether, even if it was well intended. At least the tutor was honest with her, albeit perhaps a bit too honest! Great spelling and grammar, good plot, and the ending was the icing on the cake! Kee ponw ritin gon, Hullabaloo! Have a wonderful day, good luck in the contest, and once again, welcome to WdC!
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