Hi, ruwth , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "ruwth is writing..."  "Visions of Hell..."  for "I Write in 2019" .

First thoughts: Each line of this poem gives a different word for suffering in hell. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the dark emotions forward at a good pace.

I like: I like the author's choice of rhyming words because the emphasize the negative emotions.

Suggestions: I encounter no distraction.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem because of the word choices.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .